We are a year 7 and 8 class at Pompallier Catholic School my teach is Whaea Danni.
Thursday, 26 March 2020
making appropriate blog posts 1
Friday, 13 March 2020
rabbit proof fence writing
the worst day of my life
one early Friday morning I woke up in a small wooden
cabin with my mum and dad, we went outside to collect sticks to make warm fire.
Later on in the day I went to the bush to find some food with my spear.
I saw a bush shaking up and down so I threw my spear right into the middle of it and walked
home with a Dusty, dead, snake.
cabin with my mum and dad, we went outside to collect sticks to make warm fire.
Later on in the day I went to the bush to find some food with my spear.
I saw a bush shaking up and down so I threw my spear right into the middle of it and walked
home with a Dusty, dead, snake.
I made a small grill and cut the skin off the snake and put it on.
About an hour later we had finished eating and went playing well my parents were
knitting on the deck.
About an hour later we had finished eating and went playing well my parents were
knitting on the deck.
5 minutes later I heard the rumble of a car coming down a dusty road.
He parked beside our cabin well I was playing. My mum came out the door.
And looked in the car with Suspicion.The driver opened the door and stood in front of the car.
My mum stopped and looked around then recognized the vehicle and told me and my sisters to
run! Then I ran along the fence like the wind but I saw the car speeding up behind me,Molly,
and Gracie the car came speeding past us and blocked us of he hoped out of his car ran to us
and got all 3 of us and threw us into the car.
He parked beside our cabin well I was playing. My mum came out the door.
And looked in the car with Suspicion.The driver opened the door and stood in front of the car.
My mum stopped and looked around then recognized the vehicle and told me and my sisters to
run! Then I ran along the fence like the wind but I saw the car speeding up behind me,Molly,
and Gracie the car came speeding past us and blocked us of he hoped out of his car ran to us
and got all 3 of us and threw us into the car.
My mum was crying outside my window as we drove of into to the mist.
2 and a half hours later we arrived at a big freaky place and got sent to a dark room full
of people. The lady said ‘’go to bed’’! so me and my sisters hoped into and bed and went to
sleep.
Around 10 hours later we herd. ‘’Get up come on’’ the lady said. Time for church but me and
my sisters sat on the bed for a few minutes then we had a light bulb moment and whispered to
each other ‘’lets get out of here’’ So we sneaked out of the room and in behind the toliet shack
then thay were all inside the church so we ran down the hill. When we did it I had a shy of relief
and so we ran for hours,days,weeks, and even months. Then we ran into an Aboriginal and he
said go to the train station. So we ran to the nearest train station but we saw a familiar car so
we hid behind a log and watched the man getting in the car but instead of him driving away he
slowly drove towards us...
of people. The lady said ‘’go to bed’’! so me and my sisters hoped into and bed and went to
sleep.
Around 10 hours later we herd. ‘’Get up come on’’ the lady said. Time for church but me and
my sisters sat on the bed for a few minutes then we had a light bulb moment and whispered to
each other ‘’lets get out of here’’ So we sneaked out of the room and in behind the toliet shack
then thay were all inside the church so we ran down the hill. When we did it I had a shy of relief
and so we ran for hours,days,weeks, and even months. Then we ran into an Aboriginal and he
said go to the train station. So we ran to the nearest train station but we saw a familiar car so
we hid behind a log and watched the man getting in the car but instead of him driving away he
slowly drove towards us...
Me and one of my sister's ran but for some reason Molly didn't come
(she got taken no one knew what happened to her) but that was us we followed the fence back
home. Two weeks later it was 9:30 at night and we heard the hollow noise of a rock hitting
someones head so we followed the noise and we found our parents!
(she got taken no one knew what happened to her) but that was us we followed the fence back
home. Two weeks later it was 9:30 at night and we heard the hollow noise of a rock hitting
someones head so we followed the noise and we found our parents!
in conclusion this is my rabbit proof fence writing. Hope you enjoyed thanks for reading.
Thursday, 5 March 2020
the rabbit proof fence writing
the rabbit proof fence is a movie about 3 half cast girls that got kidnapped by an Aboriginal and they get away and follow the rabbit fence home. so we have been writing a story about how we would feel if we were them.
e asttle writing test
yesterday tekahu class did an e asttle writing test. an e asttle writing test is a test to show the teacher were you are up to on your literacy or maths. Most the time you have two topics to choose from to write about. you can do this test online or on paper.
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