Rosie's wild trip

 One rainy day I fell to the ground at the point where the river Thames starts.

Then I slowly fell into the river. I experienced quiet rough water due to the rocks and the hilly dark bottom of Te Awa but I closed my eyes and floated it out.

Slowly time passed by and I opened my eyes. I was breath taken by the change of scenery not necessarily in a good way though, since I started at a sunny, vibrant location and now I have recently arrived at a humid, dark, cloudy, murky place. That means that I was in the middle of the Thames river. That's right, the most deep, dark, dangerous part of the river known to man.

I silently float through Te Awa hearing freaky noises coming from the forest either side of me.

The clock struck 5:00 in the evening as I arrived in the town. I wasn't used to houses being so close to the seaside, and jetty’s right beside the river. But having Jetty's Right by the river is probably not the best thing ever. People in swimming gear came and stood on the edge of the jetty the first thing that I thought was MANUS! Oh no! Then I heard “baa boof” and a big heavy water drop came running for me like a hammer hitting a nail. It dropped right beside me and launched me onto the land. I was stuck in the long grass. So I tried to make my way back to the river. I floated through the Long grass going from weed to weed until I found a tree stump. I decided to take the long haul up to the top of the Stump. When I got to the top I took a good glance at where I was… it wasn't good. 

I was so lost that Te Awa wasn't even Insight. So I thought that if I go the other way I would make it back and it worked though I appeared in the centre of London. I saw lots of homeless people's shelters and camping spots. I felt sorry for the homeless. I peacefully floated through the London Waters hearing the horns of gridlock traffic in the foggy distance. Within 24-hours I woke up in an unknown sea I instantly yelled “FREEDOM” I rapidly raced Around the wharf polls at the boat ramp. 

 I floated to the other end of the stealth Blue Waters and found my cosy little house in the sandbank underneath the water's surface.

                   THE END.

This is my Rosie the rain drop writing. Te Kahu class have been working on this piece of writing for about 2 weeks we have to go through 3 procedures. Number one is the first draft, number two is the second draft, and number Three is the final piece. We each have a marking buddy who marks us. one a smiley face, two a middle face, and three the sad face. For the final piece we get marked by our buddy's, then we show the teacher, and then we can post on our blogs. Thanks for taking the time to read my story. Noah.